2010/04/18

1-01b Who am I?



Hello. My name is Haruka. I’m nineteen years old. I’m a student of KGU. I study English in the University almost every day. But I can not speak English well and understand English a little. I must study harder.

I’m from Minamata. Minamata is a small town. It is in the southern part of Kumamoto. Minamata is peaceful. Minamata has two hot springs. One is Yunoko spring, it is near the sea. The other is Yunotsuru spring, it is near the mountain. What does your town have? I want to know your town.

My hobby is reading books. My favorite book is Kitchen (Yoshimoto, 1988). Every time I read it, I was moved. I like books, because books give me much information. But I don’t read books recently, because I like sleeping. When I get free time, I go to bed. Seeping is happy.

I am looking forward to going to your country and house. I wait to enjoy staying there. I want to see the scenery. I want to do something there. Could you go out with me? I hope it.

By the way, I continue to introduce myself. About my family, my father works in a machine factory. His company makes cubicles. Do you know cubicles? A cubicle is sometimes on one roof top of a department store. It generates electricity. It is small power station. My mother works in a convenience store. She is often busy, because my father and I trouble her.

I am worried about staying in your home, because I am not outgoing person. I am very shy. But I went to get along with you. Please speak to me a lot. I get used to you more and more. I am looking forward to seeing you very much. See you soon.


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3 comments:

  1. Hi Haruka,

    Would you please work the bit about your favorite book, Kitchen (Yoshimoto, 1988), into the body of your essay, and separate the paragraphs with white spaces?

    Cheers.

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  2. Hi pab,

    I did your request...
    but I do not know if it is right. sorry.

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  3. Hello again, Haruka.

    I think the sentence about your favorite book (Yoshimoto, 1988) belongs in the paragraph that begins, "My hobby is reading book[s]."

    If you strike the "Enter" key (Windows) or "return" key (Mac) again before "My hobby..." (and at the beginning of other paragraphs), the lines of white space that creates will make it easy to spot the beginning of each paragraph.

    Cheers.

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